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October23rd

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Shadowy Figure

“John, it’s 11:30. You need to hurry up!”
“Yeah, I know.”
“Your lunch is on the counter.”
“Thanks baby. Gimmie kiss. Gotta go. Running late.”
“Don’t get another speeding ticket.”
“I won’t.”

    I watched him disappear through the bedroom door, down the stairs, and out the front door. My husband had to be to work by midnight and always pressed his luck by running late. I curled up with my favorite book. Pages of erotica took me away. I read for about an hour, hit the switch on my headboard and turned off the tiny overhead light.
    I fell into a deep sleep.
    I heard a loud sound, made me sit straight up. I looked at the red numbers on the top of my nightstand, it read 4 o’clock. I sat motionless, paralyzed with fear, took a closer listen, my eyes glued to my bedroom door. After a few minutes and not hearing another sound, I figured it had to be just my imagination. So I returned my head to my pillow, and tried to fall into another sleep.

A few minutes later, I heard a new sound.
My eyes flew open, swept my bedroom, and landed on a large hooded figure standing at the foot of my bed. Fear raced through me. I had no weapons. I didn’t know what to do. My eyes moved to my bedroom door then snapped back to him. I decided to make a run for it then I jumped out of bed. But before my feet landed onto the carpeted floor, his fingers were tangled in my hair.
He tossed me back onto my bed then tied a blindfold around my head. I started to scream, that’s when he told me to shut up. Told me to be quiet and do as he said.
The shadowy figure was heavy on top of me, my wrist bound by one of his hands; he was holding my wrist above my blindfolded head. His free hand started lifting my gown, tearing my panties while pushing them aside.
Fear ripped through me like the panties he had torn off of me then thrown to the floor.
A moment later he was inside of me. Went in fast and hard. Pressed his nose against my cheek, then licked my face.
He said, “I’ve been watching you watching me.”
I didn’t say a word. His thrust were slow and deliberate. I was trying to think of how to get away.
He groaned in my ear. “You want me don’t you?
You want… me… to… give it… to… you… like… this.”
“No.”
“Yes… you do.”
“No… no… please stop.” I could hardly breathe.
That must have turned him on. My begging him to stop was turning him on. He pulled way and flipped me around. He grabbed my waist and lifted me to my knees, his erection danced in front of my opening.
That’s when I tried to give him a hard backwards kick.
He caught my foot in midair, grabbed my ankle and flipped me back around.
He said, “So you wanna play rough huh! Think you can fight back!”
I apologized, told him I wouldn’t try anything like that again.
He was inside of me again, riding deep inside of my privacy, touching my secret place, searching for my personal ecstasy.
He grunted with aggression, started tugging on my hair, pulled my head back, and buried his teeth and tongue into the side of my neck. His body stiffened, his movements slowing down. I gave him guilty moans in return, told him to please don’t stop; I kept that part secret inside of my head. He started pouring warm liquid deep inside of me; his groans sounded painful, they were now without words, his body seemed to be getting weak. I removed my blindfold; this was my chance to see. I kissed him on his forehead and told him to get off of me.
He asked me if I liked that. I said yes. I asked him what’s going to happen the next time he seduces me.
My husband’s only reply was, “You’ll just have to wait and see…”

38 Comments

  • Comment by Dreski — November 2, 2009 @ 5:42 am

    This writers really knows how to bring sexy back to act of relations. Anglic has a fresh approach to telling stories and entertaning both men and women of all ages.

    Soooo Sexy!

  • Comment by thatguy — November 3, 2009 @ 7:04 pm

    Yikes; Lol, im LOVING this!!
    You’re a great writer.. More please, MORE!! Feed my addiction, lol ;-)

  • Comment by Snoochie — November 3, 2009 @ 10:57 pm

    This shit is hot girl! Do the damn thing! I LOVE it! My ONLY complaint is that it's over!

  • Comment by Brits — November 3, 2009 @ 7:03 pm

    wow…i was like really feeling bad in the beginning! i LOVE the twist, very creative hunny! more??

  • Comment by Brits — November 4, 2009 @ 9:10 am

    wow…i was like really feeling bad in the beginning! i LOVE the twist, very creative hunny! more??

  • Comment by thatguy — November 4, 2009 @ 9:11 am

    Yikes; Lol, im LOVING this!!
    You're a great writer.. More please, MORE!! Feed my addiction, lol ;-)

  • Comment by Ray4her — November 4, 2009 @ 9:11 am

    The element of surprise in sexual role play is always fun. I really really like this story!

  • Comment by Ky Blanchett — November 4, 2009 @ 9:12 am

    this is my favorite.

  • Comment by Rick — November 4, 2009 @ 9:12 am

    Rickey LeBlanc
    i never read romance, or erotica, hell i don't even know what 2 call it. but i did read the shadowy figure and i wonder if this is what turns women on or how does that fit? sex and violence or what is it? is it violence or passion or what?

    i see the wemon love it.

    everytime i grab a woman and she says no i let go. ever since O.J. they put brothers away for that and i ain't trying to go away…. Read More

    ladies clear this up for me.

    i love you all. i really do.

    rick

  • Comment by babydoll — November 4, 2009 @ 9:13 am

    damn i totally wasnt expecting that! but i think i envied it for a sec. keep writing your very inspiring.

  • Comment by shelby — November 4, 2009 @ 9:13 am

    i loved it!!!! that was so interesting, your a great writer

  • Comment by Jane — November 4, 2009 @ 9:13 am

    Angelic you should write more. I really like it. You have a creative imagination. I adore great minds :)

  • Comment by Butterfly Kisses — November 4, 2009 @ 9:14 am

    Wow! I thought I had it all figured out! and then Pow!!! hit with the curve ball Lol!!! I Love it!! Great and inspiring writing!

  • Comment by Butterfly Kisses — November 4, 2009 @ 9:14 am

    I like that I thought I knew where it was going…and then POW switch directions!!! I Love It Angelic!! You are a truly inspiring Writer!!!

  • Comment by Angela — November 4, 2009 @ 9:14 am

    I really didn't see that coming. Great twist!

  • Comment by lexie — November 4, 2009 @ 9:15 am

    Lol… That was a twist, like it!

  • Comment by choppdnscrewed — November 4, 2009 @ 9:15 am

    w0w lovd it its one of my fantasies after i get married yaaaaay! lma0!

  • Comment by Jessiefer — November 4, 2009 @ 9:15 am

    That was an unexpected climax ;)

  • Comment by Faith — November 4, 2009 @ 9:16 am

    Lol… That was a twist, like it!

  • Comment by Stella — November 4, 2009 @ 9:16 am

    hahahaha.. I liked the ending. :) )

  • Comment by Kali — November 4, 2009 @ 9:16 am

    in the beginning i saw it coming with the husband but as the story went on i didnt beleive it was him anymore ….wow good job! very convincing

  • Comment by Lynda — November 4, 2009 @ 9:17 am

    Woah….I didn't see the husband thing coming, lol

  • Comment by angelicauthor — November 4, 2009 @ 9:21 am

    MINE TOO! Thank you Ky… See you have great taste!
    Welcome and stay. Make sure you tell all of your friends to do the same.
    Auviour Angelic

  • Comment by angelicauthor — November 4, 2009 @ 9:21 am

    Yeah, I know huh. I’m sure most people got to the forehead kiss and screamed! Then fell into the twist… Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate it. Remember to tell all of your friends to come and stay with us.
    Chow, Angelic

  • Comment by angelicauthor — November 4, 2009 @ 9:21 am

    Yes! I think it is one of mine too! LOL…
    Thanks for your comment and please tell all of your friends to come and stay with us. Remember that you and all of your friends can click on the links above and ask me private questions.
    Auviour… Angelic

  • Comment by angelicauthor — November 4, 2009 @ 9:22 am

    Jessiefer! Climax… I like that! You’re right… I don’t know how I come up with this unexpected stuff…
    I’m happy you enjoyed.. Welcome and Stay. Please tell all of your friends to do the same.
    Auviour, Angelic.

  • Comment by angelicauthor — November 4, 2009 @ 9:22 am

    Faith,
    Sexy Twist… I’m so happy you enjoyed.
    Welcome and Stay. Pass it along to all of your friends. Tell them to come and get twisted too.
    Chow, Angelic

  • Comment by angelicauthor — November 4, 2009 @ 9:22 am

    I do to Stella.
    Sometimes when I’m done writing these stories, I laugh out loud seriously and get excited about what the readers will think.
    Welcome and Stay Stella…
    Angelic

  • Comment by angelicauthor — November 4, 2009 @ 9:22 am

    OMG Kali- did you?
    Well I’m happy I could keep you guessing! Welcome and Stay for the ride… Remember to tell all of your friends to do the same.
    Chow, Angelic.

  • Comment by angelicauthor — November 4, 2009 @ 9:22 am

    I didn’t either Lynda. Not until I got to the end. I think I just may be crazy! hahahahaha.
    Thanks for the comment Lynda. Please… stay.
    Angelic.

  • Comment by Chris — November 4, 2009 @ 9:10 am

    As always, at a loss for words. Keep bringin it!

  • Comment by Mr. Mumbles — November 4, 2009 @ 9:11 am

    Hot Story Had me going Shh lol !!!!!

  • Comment by Clark — November 9, 2009 @ 12:24 am

    Good blog. Can’t wait to start my own blog.

  • Comment by JARIATERCAM — November 14, 2009 @ 11:32 pm

    Hey there everyone i was just introduceing myself here im a first time visitor who hopes to become a daily reader!

  • Comment by WamRigAidedge — November 15, 2009 @ 10:05 pm

    Hey everyone just wanna say hello and introduce myself!

  • Comment by camery — December 16, 2009 @ 6:07 pm

    hahah i thought she was gona get hurt lol ! i love this one though it made me feel like i was the girl gettin throwed around

  • Comment by MICHELLE — January 8, 2010 @ 2:26 am

    OOOOOOOOO….WEEEEEEEEEE……I WAS SO SCARED AT FIRST!…LOL…That was so good girl!!…GIMME MORE GIMME MORE POR FAVOR!!

  • Comment by Markiemad — June 21, 2010 @ 10:17 pm

    Excellent retelling of a classic scenario. Even though I suspected the stereotype, I read on to see if it had a variation. I didn't mind at all when it didn't. Really vivid descriptions.

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