Angelic Artiaga

October23rd

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11 o’clock

I picked up my cell and called her for the third time. She finally answered after four hours of telephone tag.
“Hey baby.”
I said. “Tag your it.”
She asked, “What time is the film playing?”
“11:00 p.m.”
“I have work early tomorrow.”
“I’ll go to work for you.”
Laughter in her voice. “Oh really?”
“Yes… really.”

    “But, I saw that movie a couple of weeks ago when my girlfriends and I were hanging out.”
    “You haven’t seen it from where we will be sitting.”
    “You’re right… so… I’ll be ready at 10:30.”
    “Ciao.”

It was already 9:45, didn’t have time to shave so decided to wear my 5 o’clock shadow. She likes the grungy look, says it goes nicely with my dreads, says it makes her feel hot.
I jumped in my ride, sped across town, and picked her up five minutes earlier than she was expecting me to. I got out the car to greet her but she had already started walking towards the car. As usual, she was beautiful. She knows what to wear because she knows what I like. White cami, no braw. Black miniskirt, red-hot lace g-string. Loose curls flowing down to her waist, lips shiny with sparkly gloss, hard nipples dancing under her thin shirt, and long legs stemming from the bottom of her miniskirt.
I said, “Stick out your tongue.”
She smiled then did it.
“Give me a kiss.” I sucked her tongue, licked her glossy lips, then caressed and cupped her nice round ass.
I asked, “Ready to go?”
She bit me on my chin and said, “Yes.” Her smile was broad and filled with excitement.
I opened the car door for her then closed it behind her. Jogged around to the driver’s side, jumped behind the wheel, put the stick in first, and then sped away.
We arrived at the theater about twenty minutes later with a few minutes to spare. So we sat in the car and killed time.
She said, “What’s that?”Pretending to be confused.
I amused her, “What’s what?”
Pointing her finger, she said, “That long thick thing inside of your pants?”
I looked down at my zipper and said, “What do you think it is?”
“Not sure… but I hope it’s for me…” a thin smile crawled across her face.
With my middle finger, I couldn’t resist touching her soft leg. I said, “Are you hungry?”
Her thin smile turned into a sexy mouth showing me a dark hole behind a pink tongue. She bit down on her bottom lip and nodded her head yes up and down real slow.
Just as I started to unzip my pants, she said, “Look at the time… come on… let’s go inside, I don’t want to miss the film.”
I sighed and said, “I thought you said you already seen this movie?”
“I have already seen the film… but not from where will be sitting… remember?”
“Why do you call a movie a film?”
“Because I refuse to call a film a movie.”
She giggled. I didn’t.
We headed to the box office, past the concession stand, and went straight to cinema six.
All seats were empty, we had the joint all to ourselves. It was me, her, my tongue, and my fantasy. The previews ran by, opening credit rolled, my hand slid under her miniskirt, and tugged at her red g-string.
She locked eyes with mine and said, “Nooo…”
Her voice whispered no, but the smile in her grey eyes said yes.
My finger traced the edges of her moisture and heat.
I said, “I want to kiss these lips.”
She inhaled and raised both of her eyebrows. I smiled and raised only one of mine.
I said, “Baby open your legs… Give me some.”
“Right here? Right now? What if we get caught?”
In my baritone, I whispered into her ear, “Then it will be more fun.”
I grabbed her soft calf, lifted her leg high, and draped it around my neck. Inside of the dark theater and between her legs, I saw a pretty sun rise. Belizean bikini wax exposed my swollen treat. The closer my taste buds got, the brighter the glow.
She grabbed my chin, and whispered, “Ryan… Wait… Stop. Stop.”
I looked into her eyes to see if stop really meant go. That’s when I saw her staring in the direction of the flashlight that the usher was pointing and shining on her aroused and glistening pearl. I turned back to her and…

33 Comments

  • Comment by Nema V — October 30, 2009 @ 4:50 am

    That was great sweetie! Ok, now where's the rest, I was about to….

  • Comment by BarbieDoll Johnson — October 30, 2009 @ 4:51 am

    …ok…where's the rest??? I WANT MORE!!! Lol

  • Comment by mercedes — October 30, 2009 @ 4:52 am

    gosh ur good. grabbe my attention and took me for a ride then u crashed me….i want more

  • Comment by I love it! — October 30, 2009 @ 4:52 am

    I love your writings Angelica! Keep it up :)

  • Comment by THEPOETRICIAN — October 30, 2009 @ 4:53 am

    YOU BETTER HAVE A PART TWO!!!..LOL..JUST WHEN IT WAS REALLY GETTING GOOD!!!..GREAT STORY!!

  • Comment by Houston — October 30, 2009 @ 4:53 am

    Wow! Very well written…..its hot, steamy, and very provacative! Love it!

  • Comment by VITODASKEO — October 30, 2009 @ 4:55 am

    OOWW! OOWW! DANGEROUS! ME LIKEY!

  • Comment by chamazinlyface4music — October 30, 2009 @ 4:56 am

    well written

  • Comment by Littles — October 30, 2009 @ 4:56 am

    That's was tuff I like definitley was mad it had 2 stop lol

  • Comment by Arlethia — October 30, 2009 @ 4:57 am

    WOW!!! U KNOW YOU NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME!!

  • Comment by Saumya — October 30, 2009 @ 4:57 am

    luvd d story.

  • Comment by LOstItLAStnitE — October 30, 2009 @ 4:58 am

    THiS STORy HAs Me TwISTED!!

  • Comment by LaffyTaffi — October 30, 2009 @ 4:58 am

    Great story! Got me going!

  • Comment by lily — October 30, 2009 @ 4:59 am

    Wow that ws hott!I want more!!! xP

  • Comment by angelstieup — October 30, 2009 @ 4:59 am

    hot! you know i love a good suspense, ending! tease me baby. lol. no i love the end, i dont know whether he's gonna join em or just watch or kick em out. yum.

  • Comment by Alyxx Dione — October 30, 2009 @ 5:00 am

    Wow.. that was amazing! you are a greatttt writer!!! :) tell me when a book is available to purchase!

  • Comment by Jason Mack — October 30, 2009 @ 5:01 am

    OK,OK,..OK, lady I had to stop,I've think I've gone and wet meself…hahaha… I HAD TO STOP AT, "Look at the time…..we gonna miss the film… Baby, we about to make the film…Mrs.Angelic Artiaga you are dangerous…..WOW ! I FELT THAT. Now I gotta go take a cold shower at home… alone !

  • Comment by BARbiE — October 30, 2009 @ 5:01 am

    - dat was hot ; luv'd it . Keep dewing ya thang girl !

  • Comment by MzMoMo1122 — October 30, 2009 @ 5:01 am

    Wowzers! Loves it.. held my interest from beg to end! Fantastic Job!

  • Comment by edwardjreyes — October 30, 2009 @ 5:02 am

    Provacitve and relatable at the same time. Your fascination is amazing and how you paint the whole picture with the right choice of words seems so organic from you.

    Kudos;)

  • Comment by C. Dominique Gibson — October 30, 2009 @ 5:02 am

    Where is the rest? And damned that usher. Very good!

  • Comment by Shante — October 30, 2009 @ 5:03 am

    I loved it but I would like to know what happen I just knew there was an end I guess I gotta use MY imagination lol nice though!!!!

  • Comment by daKD — October 30, 2009 @ 5:03 am

    WOW~!… that was a good read!… i was put right into the scenario, and i definitely enjoyed it!..

    keep doin ya thing!!….

  • Comment by lashana — October 30, 2009 @ 5:03 am

    I think thats so sexy in the movies …You always keep us hangin LOL …. Imma finish it he kept goin hmmmmm

  • Comment by Christopher Mathis — October 30, 2009 @ 5:04 am

    that was hot, love the way u let it build and leave the end for the imagination

  • Comment by Mary — October 30, 2009 @ 5:05 am

    GREAT!!

  • Comment by Anonymous — October 30, 2009 @ 5:06 am

    Ohhhh leave us hanging!!! Love it!!!

  • Comment by Cheryl — October 30, 2009 @ 5:06 am

    A little sexy, intriguing, & a lotta suspense. You have a gift angelicauthor More……

  • Comment by LaShawn — October 30, 2009 @ 5:07 am

    GREAT story! I love it! :)

  • Comment by nicholas — October 30, 2009 @ 5:08 am

    very enticing and sexy story,love it.

  • Comment by Sean — November 11, 2009 @ 2:48 am

    Great site cousin!!!!! Im so proud of all your accomplishments. i love you!

  • Comment by Glendon Cameron — November 24, 2009 @ 2:07 pm

    I like it ms lady!

    Glendon

  • Comment by camery — December 16, 2009 @ 6:55 pm

    omg this is my favorite one no doubt this should be a book by itself

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